Dude, how is everything you write ever so ridiculously IC? This is AMAZING. It's subtle like The Mentalist and everyone, literally everyone is pitch-perfect and given insight. And your Jane! He's so smug and charming and yet so vulnerable and broken (seriously, the Red John bit was heartbreaking), and Lisbon is matter-of-fact and observant and yet caring and Cho is kind of gruff and sharp-edged and yet slightly insecure and Rigsby is gloriously doofy and Van Pelt is the kind of enigmatic viewpoint character who's slightly awkward and nervous and suspicious and ♥.

Also I think I 'ship Jane/everyone now, because your theorising of it is THE LOVELIEST. And Jane/Lisbon is ridiculously obvious but Jane/Van Pelt is something I notice now too - queen of my heart! oh - and eee.