This is amazing. Seriously has to be the coolest thing I've ever read.
I probably will have nightmares tonight because of this.
The way you created the atmosphere was just perfect. This was just like one of those creepy dreams, really unnerving (scary, even. This made me feel a little claustrophobic at times; completely trapped), and I loved every part of it. I won't be able to look at Dalton or Blaine the same way again.