ext_148623 ([identity profile] echogarrote.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rionaleonhart 2006-06-08 03:44 am (UTC)

Remenants again

I said it before, and I'll say it again. Don't beat yourself up on the opening. SH2's opening is by itself, imitatable, and it basically says 'Here we go again...and again, and again.' to the same nightmare. Also, the 'Misty Monster Meeting' is a perfectly legit move. And I love how you've defined by not defining the monster. Really well done. And of course, add the little squeal about Ben showing up.
By the by, if you want some 'help' with 'detailed' descriptions of a monster or an environment. Look no further.
Luck in all your endavors.

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