I had great sympathy for your "ramblings", as I am undertaking the daunting task of writing my first graphic pron myself. :D
That's why I started reading the piece despite my lack of familiarity with the fandom, but I CONTINUED reading the piece because I thought the fic was engaging and hot. I particularly liked how the relationship dynamics were portrayed--Nate was confident but not TOO confident, Elena was turned on as all hell but knew where her love was, and Sully was WORRIED ABOUT SEEMING GAY. Ha! That would TOTALLY happen in a threesome and yet never seems to, at least the ones I stumble upon.
I would not have minded a few more naughty bits showing, but OTOH, more detail may have slowed down the dialogue to the point where the repartee got lost.
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That's why I started reading the piece despite my lack of familiarity with the fandom, but I CONTINUED reading the piece because I thought the fic was engaging and hot. I particularly liked how the relationship dynamics were portrayed--Nate was confident but not TOO confident, Elena was turned on as all hell but knew where her love was, and Sully was WORRIED ABOUT SEEMING GAY. Ha! That would TOTALLY happen in a threesome and yet never seems to, at least the ones I stumble upon.
I would not have minded a few more naughty bits showing, but OTOH, more detail may have slowed down the dialogue to the point where the repartee got lost.
So yeah, success!