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bass_clef ([personal profile] bass_clef) wrote in [personal profile] rionaleonhart 2019-10-05 09:55 pm (UTC)

Ahhhhh this was so perfect! I could totally see this happening between the two of them.

Also the significance of this line:

Ellie watches him anxiously. “You okay?”

He scratches the back of his neck. “You still alive?” he asks, after a moment.

“Uh, yeah,” Ellie says. “Yeah, pretty sure.”

He smiles a little. “I’m okay.”


Didn't hit me until just a second after I read it. It's so sweet and subtle. Now I'm even more excited for the sequel, this was wonderful.

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