Someone wrote in [personal profile] rionaleonhart 2020-04-22 04:43 pm (UTC)

In terms of how to tell a story being more important than what story I'm telling sometimes, I bring to you this evidence of me looking back at some old story plans. Now my definition of a story plan is not most people's; it's like an insane looking ramble. Heavy Rain was one of my big fandoms back in the day, so here you go:

"“Positive” hallucinations, and then talk about enhancing reality. Before or after the insidious line? Maybe start with an “It’s addictive”, before after this we get to “It’s insidious” – possible syntactic parallelism with first line, “There’s an even lesser known fact…”.

It’s insidious. It snakes its way into the mind and wraps itself around so subtly that it’s hard to notice at first… until it constricts. (May need revising.)

Sacrifices (sanity?) for the greater good.

Not about downgrading symptoms/side effects, it’s simply… (Tripto).

Bleeding off one addiction with another. Triptocaine, ARI.

Taint/stains on the Earth (ARI evidence)."

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I like to think anyone looking up my fic notes ever would just be like "....?????". What's the plot of this fic? Something to do with addiction. But first, let's look at how we will get across some concepts in a literary way! I don't know where I wanted to go with this, but I can see the dream-like quality I wanted to write it in.

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