I have to say, twelve year-old Riona had very tidy prose! I'm impressed. At that age, I'm pretty sure I was all purple and full up on run-on sentences, so - basically nothing has changed.
I stepped out, wincing – my Mewtwo legs had cramped up.
Honestly, same.
Re: LIS3 - I'm tentatively excited! Graphically, it looks amazing. Based off the description of the plot, I'm a bit worried it will veer too closely to Dontnod's Twin Mirror, which I largely did not enjoy and will never replay. But Dontnod isn't even involved, apparently, so who can say.
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I have to say, twelve year-old Riona had very tidy prose! I'm impressed. At that age, I'm pretty sure I was all purple and full up on run-on sentences, so - basically nothing has changed.
I stepped out, wincing – my Mewtwo legs had cramped up.
Honestly, same.
Re: LIS3 - I'm tentatively excited! Graphically, it looks amazing. Based off the description of the plot, I'm a bit worried it will veer too closely to Dontnod's Twin Mirror, which I largely did not enjoy and will never replay. But Dontnod isn't even involved, apparently, so who can say.