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wolfy_writing ([personal profile] wolfy_writing) wrote in [personal profile] rionaleonhart 2022-06-02 03:13 pm (UTC)

Aw!

This made me think of the movie The Brothers Bloom, which opened up with a narrator speaking in the third person, and also in rhyme, before having the movie jump to one of the characters doing first-person narration, and then just abandoning the idea of a narrator altogether. So your thirteen-year-old self was producing work that was comparable to acclaimed director Rian Johnson, at least in that specific way.

I love that the weird kid thing was what your character couldn't believe when you not only had just been sucked into a video game, but also still had the magic sword attached to your hand.

The turn-based system is both conceptually interesting and really frustrating to picture trying to follow.

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