I can’t believe my convenient memory loss let me remember Blitzball but obliterated Auron entirely.

No, that makes complete sense.

"That's because it's not its turn yet," explained the man. "And we have to fight it because the Escape command isn't active."

Holy shit, I’d completely forgotten that the fighting in this fic was turn-based.

omg. That may be the singular best bit of prose I've ever read.







You're going to finish it, right? Right?

... could I hire you to finish it? What's your hourly rate for producing semi-original content?