Nice work on the title A Sight for Sore Eyes! I'm very bad at titles and I'm always impressed when someone comes up with the perfect one.

I love your picks for best first/last lines, especially the ending of Liturgy.

past tense is too ‘together’ seeming for a character who is distinctly quirky, paranoid and a conspiracy theorist.

This is really interesting! I know what you mean; past tense does feel more composed than present, in a way.

I have to applaud you for writing from Sent's perspective; that sounds incredibly difficult to me. I wouldn't know where to start.