"I wouldn't forget me. Honestly I'm a bit offended." Hee!
I absolutely love Dean being all 'Pfft, we may be amnesiac, but I don't see why we shouldn't have sex. THERE CANNOT BE ANYTHING WRONG WITH THIS PLAN.' Oh, Dean.
I find the 'oh, yeah, and Adam disappeared. MOVING ON' far too amusing.
Sam and Dean were tired and cranky enough to split up themselves
DO NOT SPLIT UP. SPLITTING UP IS ALWAYS A BAD IDEA.
I am actually wincing at the fight with the Tailypo. Ouch.
Dean stood up, and yelled "Hey, thanks for leaving us out there to die!" at the woods.
Have I mentioned that you write a very good Dean? And "You? Not being dead?" He flashed a grin in the direction of Sam's left hip. "Fuckin' turn-on, man." is brilliant.
I love "Will you stop touching me?" Dean snarled. ADAM'S WORST ENEMY: A MAN WHO DOES NOT LIKE BEING TOUCHED BY PEOPLE WHO ARE NEITHER FEMALE NOR FAMILY.
Also, Adam is so creepy.
I really, really like using tactics Sam could recognize from his own persuasive arsenal.
"Not in my version," Dean said, and Adam looked up into his fist.
ASKFJHGDGDJGDKH OH MAN I AM FLAILING SO MUCH THEY ARE THE WINCHESTERS AND THEY SAVE EACH OTHER AND I LOVE THEM
"Yeah, we don't really need to. Bye, Adam." "You can't!" Adam yelled, an instant before he fired. "I mean you can't." "And why the hell not?" Dean snapped. "Please," Adam said. "Not a good reason," Dean said.
Seriously, it's a shame you don't like Dean, because you are amazing at writing him.
Sam recoiled. It wasn't a reasoned response, it was conditioned--whatever Adam had left in his brain acted up, made him hit Dean's hand away. "Don't touch me."
Oh, and this distresses me so much. And, of course, it reminds Dean of what happened, and why do I have this simultaneous adoration and hatred of Winchester-angst?
"Look," he blurted, getting the words out as fast as he could, "if you need to talk I'll listen, but if you don't mind, Sam, I'd rather not look at you right now, seeing as how last night I--"
Oh, hearts. Dean and his guilt is a wonderful thing.
Augh, it is so horrible when there's awkwardness between them!
It was easy to recognize the series of keys denoting their fathers' autodial is a really lovely detail. And oh, oh, boys.
Re: This may be the roughest thing I've written in three months. ...actually, it felt good.
I absolutely love Dean being all 'Pfft, we may be amnesiac, but I don't see why we shouldn't have sex. THERE CANNOT BE ANYTHING WRONG WITH THIS PLAN.' Oh, Dean.
I find the 'oh, yeah, and Adam disappeared. MOVING ON' far too amusing.
Sam and Dean were tired and cranky enough to split up themselves
DO NOT SPLIT UP. SPLITTING UP IS ALWAYS A BAD IDEA.
I am actually wincing at the fight with the Tailypo. Ouch.
Dean stood up, and yelled "Hey, thanks for leaving us out there to die!" at the woods.
Have I mentioned that you write a very good Dean? And "You? Not being dead?" He flashed a grin in the direction of Sam's left hip. "Fuckin' turn-on, man." is brilliant.
I love "Will you stop touching me?" Dean snarled. ADAM'S WORST ENEMY: A MAN WHO DOES NOT LIKE BEING TOUCHED BY PEOPLE WHO ARE NEITHER FEMALE NOR FAMILY.
Also, Adam is so creepy.
I really, really like using tactics Sam could recognize from his own persuasive arsenal.
"Not in my version," Dean said, and Adam looked up into his fist.
ASKFJHGDGDJGDKH OH MAN I AM FLAILING SO MUCH THEY ARE THE WINCHESTERS AND THEY SAVE EACH OTHER AND I LOVE THEM
"Yeah, we don't really need to. Bye, Adam."
"You can't!" Adam yelled, an instant before he fired. "I mean you can't."
"And why the hell not?" Dean snapped.
"Please," Adam said.
"Not a good reason," Dean said.
Seriously, it's a shame you don't like Dean, because you are amazing at writing him.
Sam recoiled. It wasn't a reasoned response, it was conditioned--whatever Adam had left in his brain acted up, made him hit Dean's hand away. "Don't touch me."
Oh, and this distresses me so much. And, of course, it reminds Dean of what happened, and why do I have this simultaneous adoration and hatred of Winchester-angst?
"Look," he blurted, getting the words out as fast as he could, "if you need to talk I'll listen, but if you don't mind, Sam, I'd rather not look at you right now, seeing as how last night I--"
Oh, hearts. Dean and his guilt is a wonderful thing.
Augh, it is so horrible when there's awkwardness between them!
It was easy to recognize the series of keys denoting their fathers' autodial is a really lovely detail. And oh, oh, boys.