DERREN, I DO NOT TRUST YOUR CLAIMS OF AMNESIA AT ALL.
There’s a Jeremy around here somewhere, busy going after the only door in the place with a hammer.
Oh, Jeremy. He would!
At least I think I am. I can’t actually remember anything at the moment. But I don’t feel particularly homicidal.
Hee! I love that James goes 'well, considering the circumstances, I can't be entirely certain I'm not a homicidal maniac'.
'for what that’s worse' should be 'for what that's worth'. But you use 'for what that's worth' in the next thing James says, so perhaps you should remove one of them (perhaps 'I'm not a zombie, at any rate'?).
Richard thinks James is annoyingly tall! Ah, well, Richard, at least Derren is only two or three inches taller than you. Although he could probably make you think he's seven foot.
AND WHY DO YOU THINK IT'S SOMETHING ELSE, DERREN? THAT'S RIGHT: BECAUSE YOU ARE TOTALLY RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS. Also, cunning to pretend that you can't quite remember Jeremy's name.
“Who’s a git, then?” Richard frowned. “Are we being insulted? Because if someone’s going to kidnap me, erase my memory, and call me a git…”
Heeeee!
I love Jeremy describing himself as a 'towering giant of manliness'.
Apparently I’m the only one here who does think.
I like that they quickly fall into their regular roles, even with memory loss.
“Gits,” Jeremy corrected.
I just love this. He's so certain!
OH, YES, DERREN, AND WHY WOULD YOU THINK OF 'STIG' DESPITE ALLEGEDLY HAVING YOUR MEMORY WIPED? YOU'RE NOT FOOLING ME.
“Actually, most cavemen were quite small,” James said. “Poor nutrition.” Richard gave James a surprised look. “You don’t know your last name, but you know that?”
Hee!
Is Derren flirting with Hammond? I do hope Derren is flirting with Hammond. And I hope that this rambling has somehow magically spawned inspiration.
Re: Comment-fic bits
There’s a Jeremy around here somewhere, busy going after the only door in the place with a hammer.
Oh, Jeremy. He would!
At least I think I am. I can’t actually remember anything at the moment. But I don’t feel particularly homicidal.
Hee! I love that James goes 'well, considering the circumstances, I can't be entirely certain I'm not a homicidal maniac'.
'for what that’s worse' should be 'for what that's worth'. But you use 'for what that's worth' in the next thing James says, so perhaps you should remove one of them (perhaps 'I'm not a zombie, at any rate'?).
Richard thinks James is annoyingly tall! Ah, well, Richard, at least Derren is only two or three inches taller than you. Although he could probably make you think he's seven foot.
“I don’t think it’s initials.” Derren shook his head. “I think it’s something else.
AND WHY DO YOU THINK IT'S SOMETHING ELSE, DERREN? THAT'S RIGHT: BECAUSE YOU ARE TOTALLY RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS. Also, cunning to pretend that you can't quite remember Jeremy's name.
“Who’s a git, then?” Richard frowned. “Are we being insulted? Because if someone’s going to kidnap me, erase my memory, and call me a git…”
Heeeee!
I love Jeremy describing himself as a 'towering giant of manliness'.
Apparently I’m the only one here who does think.
I like that they quickly fall into their regular roles, even with memory loss.
“Gits,” Jeremy corrected.
I just love this. He's so certain!
OH, YES, DERREN, AND WHY WOULD YOU THINK OF 'STIG' DESPITE ALLEGEDLY HAVING YOUR MEMORY WIPED? YOU'RE NOT FOOLING ME.
“Actually, most cavemen were quite small,” James said. “Poor nutrition.”
Richard gave James a surprised look. “You don’t know your last name, but you know that?”
Hee!
Is Derren flirting with Hammond? I do hope Derren is flirting with Hammond. And I hope that this rambling has somehow magically spawned inspiration.