rionaleonhart: final fantasy x-2: the sun is rising, yuna looks to the future. (if only for a moment (rullaroo))
Riona ([personal profile] rionaleonhart) wrote 2007-06-13 10:07 pm (UTC)

Yes! The use of 'the former understudy' was a bit odd, and I think it might have been better just to use Lee's name there (it can feel a bit strange when you're writing to keep using the names, but it generally doesn't bother the readers, and epithets can make them have a bit of a 'wait what how many people are there?' moment. Sorry, I'm talking too much), but it was a very small detail and almost entirely eclipsed by my love.

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