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Riona ([personal profile] rionaleonhart) wrote2023-05-21 06:12 pm

I Have My Mother's Dreams.

My mum read and enjoyed Across the Ocean, my Sense8-inspired Jack/Kate Lost fic!

I'm very excited about this. My writing's important to me, so it's something I want to share with my mother, but I don't often have the chance; most of the things I write aren't really understandable if you don't know the canon they're based on. But I thought Across the Ocean was divorced enough from canon to potentially work for someone who hadn't seen Lost.

When I sent my mum the fic link, I also sent her a handful of pictures of Jack and Kate together, so she'd know what the characters in question looked like. I'll be honest: it felt pretty weird to be sending my own mother a shippy picspam.

Anyway, she said she really liked the fic! Apparently she also looked up and watched Jack and Kate's first kiss in canon afterwards, which sort of delights me. (She also hunted down a breakdown of the show on Reddit by Googling 'Lost explained for dummies'.)

My mum pointed out an error in the fic; at one point I'd forgotten that Kate was wearing handcuffs. When I went 'oh, I should add a bit where she gets out of the handcuffs,' she went 'no, I think they should have sex and he should really like that she's wearing the handcuffs.'

She also wanted a scene where Kate goes 'we should get these handcuffs off' and Jack goes 'hmmm, maybe not yet.' I think my mother ships these characters more than I do.