Sam Winchester Cries His Way Through Sex.

Right. What with the looming essay deadline and my upcoming presentation, 'writing about attractive young men having incestuous sex with each other' is pretty much absolute last on the list of Things I Should Really Be Doing Right Now.

Guess what I've been doing? HINT: I am stupid.

This is my first attempt at Supernatural fanfiction, so I'm really quite nervous about it. It's an AU for 'Mystery Spot' (which, incidentally, was amazing, and I was in tears by the end of it). I have made a few adjustments to the place in which the Winchesters are staying, but hopefully nothing too jarring; all I've really done is change the motel into a hotel. That's, um, that's not the entire premise of the AU.

PG-13 or so; 1,200 words. Contains non-explicit incest and spoilers for 'Mystery Spot'. Not posted to any communities, because a) I wouldn't know where to put it, and b) I've probably cocked it up enormously (I am always so nervous with first fics, and I've still only seen about a quarter of Supernatural). (EDIT: Because you have all been so lovely, I think I've built up the courage to link to it on wincest.) Thoughts, comments, advice on characterising the Winchester boys would all be appreciated.


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