Jan. 7th, 2019

rionaleonhart: okami: amaterasu is startled. (NOT SO FAST)
I love how many of you are coming along on this ridiculous adventure with me.

Previously on Old Fanfiction Book Club: Rachel, on her way to the Pewter Gym, ran into her perplexingly assigned rival James, not to be confused with any Jameses who might actually exist in Pokémon canon. He's just dramatically challenged her to a battle. Things are about to get weird.

The original author's note for chapter nine: Hey, nobody's sent me any characters! :( If I don't get any, the story will end at chapter 15!

Anyway, I REALLY REALLY HATE CHAPTERS 9 AND 10. So, out of guilt for bad quality I bring you not one, not two, but THREE chapters for your enjoyment (or torture)! I suggest you read the first two with your eyes closed.


Unfortunately, right now you're only getting the chapters I hated even at the age of thirteen. (I started writing this at twelve, but I only started posting it to fanfiction.net when I was thirteen, which makes it hard to pin down which chapters were written at which age.)


ExpandRachel's Pokémon Journey, Chapter Nine, with annotations. )


dun dun dunnnnnnnn


ExpandRachel's Pokémon Journey, Chapter Ten, with annotations. )


In the next instalment of Old Fanfiction Book Club: we discover Team Rocket's sinister plan and, in the process, expose young Riona's dark secret.